My Rewrite Ancient Power

As I've been working on this rewrite and turning it more towards an original story I've made some discoveries..

1. I hate the name I chose for the headmaster of Ars Magika.. so I am changing it from Kiano... to Reginald Van Pelt (still doesn't make me happy but i like it a little better)
2. some of my readers found it a little hard to jump right into without getting a little lost so I've created a short Prologue to help explain some almost ancient history.

with this being said and done I'm gonna repost with the current changes..

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